A run-on sentence in our context section was pointed out, we have broken this into several sentences as suggested.
There were also some comments about the lack of solutions on our poster. However, if we go back to the rubric, coming up with solutions for our case study is not required at this point of the project. We will, however, make sure to include solutions during our poster presentation.
We found the suggestion to change our in-text citations to footnotes useful and it will help us cut down on the overall “wordiness” of our poster.
Visual Feedback
Several commenters suggested that we reduce the amount of text on our poster as it felt slightly overwhelming at first glance. To address this we have attempted to make our sentences more concise and increase the font to give it better readability. We agree this will improve our posters’ readability. We attempted to cut down the amount of information on our poster however we found all the points made were necessary to the poster’s overall message.
A couple of commenters gave some helpful feedback saying we should bold our subheadings within our “inter-relationship” section, we have done just that.
It was suggested to change the colour of the background for our headings to make them stand out more, we agree this will improve the visual aspect of our poster.
